Thursday, June 8, 2017

Beware Of Webs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Soft and silky strands he ejects
He crawls up and down on the strands
Swings and climbs on the tree
Wind  drifts him from trees to  trees
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Rini Shibu
fly
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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 December 2017

You have left a great message to the human society through this little poem Liked it

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Lamar Cole 21 June 2017

Nice poem. Good surprising ending.

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Rini Shibu 22 June 2017

Thanks a lot lam

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

A poem which makes us aware of the hidden dangers in our own (civilized) society too though metaphorically speaking. Beautifully written. Thanks for visiting my page to read poem of the day 'Musing of an Autistic

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Rini Shibu 12 June 2017

Thanks for your comments kaul

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Saadat Tahir 09 June 2017

:) hmmmm.... lovely.......incisive, contemporary and on another level enjoyed

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Rini Shibu 10 June 2017

Thanks Saadat

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Kishore Kumar Das 09 June 2017

The spider web......invisible threads...the lofty skill adopted by the spider to catch the fly...all these have emulated the 'hidden danger' in any work....you have meticulously described the strategy adopted by the spider in your poetic style.....10 points to you..

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Rini Shibu 09 June 2017

Thanks kishore..we should be vigilant to face hidden dangers

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2017

Scary and hairy! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 08 June 2017

Thanks Edward..

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 June 2017

Hi Rini, Fantastic! A keen observer of nature, you are! And nature behaves exactly as you have written. How keenly, the spider builds his web! How he is endowed by nature to spin his web! A web that could stick a fly to it, but not the spider! And with a deadly venom to instantly immobilize his victim, so he could pray on it. The intrigues of nature is like this! ! Truly inconceivable.. And finally, in order source enough of the right nutrients for the next generation, the female spider has to eat him up; but not before she secures his genes to pass on to the next generation, in an awesome mating. Coming to think of it, the females of all species are equally deadly, it is not? ? ? Hehehe! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A perfect 10+++ for this lovely poem!

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Rini Shibu 08 June 2017

Thank you.. deadly according to the role, you forgot about the innocent hover fly. :)

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