Saturday, January 11, 2014

Beware Of These Men, Love Vs Lust, Comments

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Young women learn it for yourselves
It`s at times an illusion as some say
This humbug of love of men whom you call dear
In between the moments of living and dying
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Shahzia Batool 13 January 2014

an honest advice in a commanding tone...felt on pulse!

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Kanav Justa 13 January 2014

, , , every young woman must heed to this write, , every bit you wrote was true, , , there are wolves everywhere who have a facade of human skin, , but inside there is a beast, , , , wonderful write, , , and so true are these line And in the speechless closeness of your pets that never write poems You may see the scent of a love emitted in plenty.

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Valsa George 13 January 2014

Reading this poem and the poet's note, I am so delighted! This is such a wonderful warning of caution for all reckless girls and women. When it comes from a man about the vile behind the smile of some men, it assumes greater authenticity. Dinesh, I am happy that my poem 'Flight 'gave you the impetus to pen this beautiful poem that might help many naive ladies lacking in maturity who without afterthought jump into irredeemable pits of their own making, going after their rash impulses!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 January 2014

Nice advice in view of what we are seeing. Hope everyone reads these poems. Thank you.

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