Beware Of The Bushes Comments

I've noticed a resounding theme in many of your poems. You've been screwed over time and again and that these snakes have a mesmerizing charm, a smooth seductive speech and probably have some pretty elusive moves. Not all men are like this but I would say a vast majority are sadly enough. Just keep penning your heart out while you live, learn, love.

I expected with this he would be satisfied, beautifully written expressive poem. Nice on sharing.

i hate to say it, but..................brilliant! to MyPoemList it goes. and to think that this is a TRUE story! but, really, did you dream this while asleep or while awake? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - my favorite parts: When he politely asked for food, His words were hypnotic, And pleasant. AND OF COURSE: chopped liver - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i wonder what topic this poem is listed under on PH. bushes, liver, hypnotic? thanks so much for sharing. bri :) [that wasn't a bad comment, was it? ] i'm even going to send it to one or more of my PH friends.