Monday, May 6, 2019

Beware Of Love That You Cannot Touch With Your Hand Comments

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Beware of love that you cannot touch with your hand,
No matter how smart and beautiful it appears.
You fall in there and build your castle on the sand.
Be cautious, or you will end up in bitter tears.
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Galina Italyanskaya
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C F 07 May 2019

An outstanding write, as always from your heart and mind.... a wise advice to lovers and dreamers who aim for unreachable stars.10+

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 May 2019

A well crafted poem, dear Ma'am Galina...........10+++++++++++

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Put Chandra 06 May 2019

A poem that flows well. Be careful of cliches. They do not add a poetic touch.

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 May 2019

Hi Galina, A poem invoking deep thoughts on the meaning of life, love. “Yet there are things more important than life and death “.. deeply philosophical. A million 10s and onto MyPoemList

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