Beware Of Her! Comments

Yes the deep insight along the lines is quite mesmerising and reflectively profound, it is one of those that throws you in the deep thoughs of reality, the structure of your poem can atleast be divided into verses to allow easy digestion for the reader, but its in the greatest of not your pen but you mind, emotions and soul, thank you for sharing The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

That is a deep poem, the theme comes out on two fronts, a direct presentation and secondly the strong use of symbolism. You have captured attention I will be reading more of your poems