Morning rays
Light up the brilliance
of diamond jewels,
As it moves, draped
...
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a good imagery using the glittering river and ocean...tantalising womanhood in ultimate 'confluence' with manhood...good imaginative write, enigmatic though 10
There is music, rhythm, color and paint in this poetic composition! Why not try also short stories to unburden your poetic vision? ! 10/10 -Raj Nandy
New ammmmazing taste have got from this one. chosen words are fine! ........10+
A journey, towards destination, on the way... with diverse... A beautiful poem.10 for it.