Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Bevy Of Girls Comments

Rating: 4.4

Bevy of girls on a fast food chain
Sixty years old as per their mane
Some are plump and there’s one in cane
I smile as I see they are still vain
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2015

I can’t help but wonder what about me Would I be as contented would I be in glee Would I still laugh out loud loud and free What would happen to me if I reach sixty Futuristic thoughts.... . very interesting and sometimes funny lines which made me smile thank you. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2015

Your poem 'Bevy Of Girls' is a pleasure to read. Happy and contented women, young or old alike, are like happy flowers that dance and sway with breeze, hum with the bees and babble like a brook. Thanks for the notes

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 September 2014

Attractive title and super poem on fashionable grannys. Pls do review my latest poem too

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Hazel Durham 18 August 2014

Bubbling with energy and the joy of living, so beautifully expressed!

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