Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Betwixt Us Comments

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It's true we see each other
Face to face, but you see,
There's a glass-sheet between us
That keeps us still two.
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ATUL CHANDRA SARKAR
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Elena Plotkin 05 November 2015

Great and powerfully evocative lines! The last line especially. I have only a small criticism I believe it should be a silence between us not a silent between us.10+ as always.

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