Betwixt All That Unhealthy Surrounds.... Comments

Today's atmosphere is highly polluted. Air, water and soil and many resources are polluted. This is the time to think very deeply on this issue. We have to resolve and retrieve the beauty of life and nature. You have transferred wonderful message through this excellently penned poem...10

This poem deserves full 10 point and this is definitely a very thought provoking poem shared. This poem carries a burning issue and we feel the truth behind this poem. An amazing sharing is done really.10

There's a deep sadness that one encounters when one explores questions that involve government. On the one hand, we are told the government is needed to improve quality of life. But, as you so brilliantly observe, the hand of government is one that often leads to destruction and death. This is a magnificent work, Sylvia.

A great statement about air quality. Fortunately we are not facing this in Australia with exception to the recent fires in some areas.

betwixt all that tattered sound governmental abound be in rapture entirely different than be excited on dusty polluted ground away from home bound betwixt all that unhealthy surround..

no food, no coffee nor tea no fresh air at all for me no peace, no hope, no love at all beware, soon you'll wear your politic pall

Betwixt all that unhealthy surrounds, don't know how, the air in your country is so polluted the government does nothing about it at all looks just like all residents are executed