Monday, November 7, 2005

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The tracks scream out beneath the train.
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sal carter
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Phillip Sawatzky 16 December 2006

Sal, Are you really 15 years old? This is not of that age, reminds me of myself when I was young and in high school and wrote sonnets on the way home from school, in my head. Tell us how you came upon this. Keep writing these blessings. phillip

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Michael Shepherd 08 November 2005

A distinguished effort.

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Not Long Left 07 November 2005

great poem this one, Vince

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sal carter

sal carter

reigate, surrey, england
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