Between You And Me Comments

Intense longing expressed through these beautiful verses. A very nice poem

A beautiful and sad poem on what once seemed to be a viable option, but no longer gracing the Christmas table, an idyllic river between you and her or him, feeding the two of you with fresh salmons, the peace of mind and inner harmony, instead an annihilating sea of sad tears emerged threatening the future of a broken world left without bridges, the absence of love as it was meant to be; very well done indeed –

Love... And death.... And a vale of tears. Painfully beautiful lines

Between you and me Is a long stretch of sea Preventing us From communicating with each other Properly. - - - - - - - -A wonderful write expressing heart's love and frustration.If love is life, separation is like death and in between there is vast stretch of salty sea of tears- - - -.

Superb write. The nuances of love n life are so wonderfully depicted through this very profound write. A big 10.