Between you and me
In all these years
That have been
There has come to live,
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" Love" is an overloaded word. But yes, it has a way of making its presence felt even if you say it or not.
A heartfelt and touching poem of the day. Congrats, sir Deepak for being selected....10++++
Thank you for your appreciation and observation about the poem. Thanks for the generous rating too.
Congratulations on loving and sharing so much of your time together. Beautiful poem. A wonderful gift too for your wife. Happy Birthday.
Thank you for appreciating the poem. Thank you for the birthday wishes too.
A poem That permeates The yours affectionately Dishes of crumble and cream.. beautiful. really fine. tony
Thanks Tony. Believe me the " crumble and cream" is an important ingredient of a relationship. Thanks for your appreciation and for reading some of my other poems too.
lovely romantic poem! Congratulations on your poem being chosen as Poem Of The Day!
A wonderful poem of love and friendship. It becomes more fascinating because it is a marriage of 39 years. And the bond is truly more stronger and more beautiful between the husband and wife. A well deserved POD. Heartiest Congratulations Deepak ji........10
A glowing birth day greetings to the loved one that nurtures a bondage of poetry. Well deserved poem of the Day.
This wonderful work is a beautiful tribute to your better half on her birthday! May congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
Very heartfelt birthday wishes. Very well crafted poem for wife.Shows your deep love for her. Loved it. 'A poem That permeates The yours affectionately Dishes of crumble and cream'....is so beautiful. Congrats.
Thank you. Yes, the " crumble and cream" is a significant part of our lives together.
Thank you. Yes, bringing the reader " into" the poem is important for me.
Between You And Me.....between wife and husband, between self and friends.....a fascinating poem with deep love has beeen amazingly delineated. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the POD.
Impeccable expression of love running through an unending romance between a husband and his wife. Thanks, Congrats and Best Wishes to you both.
Thank you for liking the poem and for your kind best wishes for us.
a verse a poem slowly speaks slowly tells the tale of the living soul of poem...........//// really a beautiful poem penned; like it
To get to the land of poems, tales, poetry and verse is just a flight of imagination. Thank you for liking my poem.
A magnificent write- - - -A poem that has come to live between you and your beloved ! Congratulations for being seected as the Poet of the Day!
Thank you for liking it and commenting on it. Catching that poem and putting it into its words one day remains a work-in-progress for me.
The way you allow the words to fall into place is great. It all comes over so naturally and the subject of the poem is achieved through that way. You have the sense that the poem is elusive but sometimes just there but not quite. Let's see more of your poems.
Yes, a poem that is so elusive that it defies being put into words. Thank you for sharing the sense of the poem and that universal quest amongst us all.
A poem That permeates The yours affectionately Dishes of crumble and cream great great write 10+++++++++++++++
Glad you particularly enjoyed the " dishes of crumble and cream." Thanks for the 10+ and more.
A lovely piece to reminisce on mature love between the two in love.
this poem moves me. It reminds me of my parents' marriage of 60 years. Only wish I find someone like you to write a beautiful poem to me, as I to him
Glad you could find something for yourself in this poem. We wish you the best in your search for that elusive someone. Thanks for your appreciation.
In all these years! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, in all these years - just a poem! Thanks for your appreciation.
Wishing everyone that all marriages are sustained by poems such as this. Congrats for being chosen POD.
You are putting too big a responsibility on this little poem to sustain " all marriages" . Keeping marriages together is that elusive mysterious thing that we must know is there but never really encounter. Thank you for appreciating the poem.