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Between You And Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

Between you and me
In all these years
That have been
There has come to live,
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Deepak Manchanda of Delhi
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C F 07 July 2019

Wishing everyone that all marriages are sustained by poems such as this. Congrats for being chosen POD.

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

You are putting too big a responsibility on this little poem to sustain " all marriages" . Keeping marriages together is that elusive mysterious thing that we must know is there but never really encounter. Thank you for appreciating the poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 July 2019

Love, love, love and love always

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

" Love" is an overloaded word. But yes, it has a way of making its presence felt even if you say it or not.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 July 2019

A heartfelt and touching poem of the day. Congrats, sir Deepak for being selected....10++++

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Thank you for your appreciation and observation about the poem. Thanks for the generous rating too.

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Lyn Paul 07 July 2019

Congratulations on loving and sharing so much of your time together. Beautiful poem. A wonderful gift too for your wife. Happy Birthday.

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Thank you for appreciating the poem. Thank you for the birthday wishes too.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2019

A poem That permeates The yours affectionately Dishes of crumble and cream.. beautiful. really fine. tony

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Thanks Tony. Believe me the " crumble and cream" is an important ingredient of a relationship. Thanks for your appreciation and for reading some of my other poems too.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 07 July 2019

lovely romantic poem! Congratulations on your poem being chosen as Poem Of The Day!

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A wonderful poem of love and friendship. It becomes more fascinating because it is a marriage of 39 years. And the bond is truly more stronger and more beautiful between the husband and wife. A well deserved POD. Heartiest Congratulations Deepak ji........10

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Glad you liked it. Thanks for your appreciation.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 July 2019

A glowing birth day greetings to the loved one that nurtures a bondage of poetry. Well deserved poem of the Day.

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Thank you. Yes, a poem binds us together. Glad you liked it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 July 2019

This wonderful work is a beautiful tribute to your better half on her birthday! May congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 July 2019

Very heartfelt birthday wishes. Very well crafted poem for wife.Shows your deep love for her. Loved it. 'A poem That permeates The yours affectionately Dishes of crumble and cream'....is so beautiful. Congrats.

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Thank you. Yes, the " crumble and cream" is a significant part of our lives together.

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Harley White 07 July 2019

Nicely expressed... brings the reader into the picture...

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Deepak Manchanda 08 July 2019

Thank you. Yes, bringing the reader " into" the poem is important for me.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 July 2019

Between You And Me.....between wife and husband, between self and friends.....a fascinating poem with deep love has beeen amazingly delineated. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the POD.

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

Thank you for liking the poem. Glad you liked it.

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Rajnish Manga 07 July 2019

Impeccable expression of love running through an unending romance between a husband and his wife. Thanks, Congrats and Best Wishes to you both.

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

Thank you for liking the poem and for your kind best wishes for us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 July 2019

a verse a poem slowly speaks slowly tells the tale of the living soul of poem...........//// really a beautiful poem penned; like it

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

To get to the land of poems, tales, poetry and verse is just a flight of imagination. Thank you for liking my poem.

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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2019

A magnificent write- - - -A poem that has come to live between you and your beloved ! Congratulations for being seected as the Poet of the Day!

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

Thank you for liking it and commenting on it. Catching that poem and putting it into its words one day remains a work-in-progress for me.

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Adrian Flett 07 July 2019

The way you allow the words to fall into place is great. It all comes over so naturally and the subject of the poem is achieved through that way. You have the sense that the poem is elusive but sometimes just there but not quite. Let's see more of your poems.

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

Yes, a poem that is so elusive that it defies being put into words. Thank you for sharing the sense of the poem and that universal quest amongst us all.

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Adeeb Alfateh 07 July 2019

A poem That permeates The yours affectionately Dishes of crumble and cream great great write 10+++++++++++++++

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

Glad you particularly enjoyed the " dishes of crumble and cream." Thanks for the 10+ and more.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 July 2019

A lovely piece to reminisce on mature love between the two in love.

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

thanks for your kind comment

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Leeann Azzopardi 07 July 2019

this poem moves me. It reminds me of my parents' marriage of 60 years. Only wish I find someone like you to write a beautiful poem to me, as I to him

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

Glad you could find something for yourself in this poem. We wish you the best in your search for that elusive someone. Thanks for your appreciation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 July 2019

In all these years! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Deepak Manchanda 07 July 2019

Yes, in all these years - just a poem! Thanks for your appreciation.

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Deepak Manchanda of Delhi

Deepak Manchanda of Delhi

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