Between Walls Comments

A profound write with a lot of meaning lying between the lines. A perfect classic poem of the day.

I've seen broken pieces of green bottle as grass substitute

It is quite amazing when a broken bottle takes to the mind with such thought. When you actually take notice of the simple things in life.

Muse! ! Broken! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

average concept but well knitted words.....please read my poems too

I appreciate this beautiful poem well composed by William Carlos Williams.

A beautifully observational piece complex in its simplicity 10+++

the back wings of the hospital where nothing will grow lie cinders In which shine the broken pieces of a green bottle awesome poem great 10++++++++++

From ashes arise the Phoenix, from destruction comes new creation, from nothing does come something, and a thousand and one thing can be inferred from this one liner of a poem that occupies ten. Modern poems, I bow to thee.

A great poem by William Carlos Williams...