Friday, February 9, 2007

Between Us Comments

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If you are far, then what is this I feel
The weight within my heart, upon my hands
If this is distance, does it fall
Between us, does it own us
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Frank Bana
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Original Unknown Girl 26 April 2007

This is stunning, you say so eloquently that which I was trying to convey in my 'ever near' creation. (Though yours speaks so very highly of everything I was trying to put across) Tearchokingly beautiful. HG: -) xx

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