Friday, August 21, 2020

Between Us Comments

Rating: 5.0

Meaning rises like a phoenix
In the space between us.
My mother's love for you
Raises me from the ashes
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 August 2020

Good poem. As they say experience is the best teacher. So let him enjoy his own experience

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Ace Of Black Hearts 21 August 2020

All I can say is wow, such an excellent poem. Definitely a 10.

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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