Between Us Comments

awesome write.................If in every rose we find a thorn There can't be grins any more..............we.should be like clouds.................................

Annoyances are but likely to stay If life not lived together With harmony and happiness If life is not lived together, between people especially between husband and wife, annoyances are likely to occur and stay for long! Our life is to be lived in harmony and the happiness arising from it! A very meaningful write!

why can't life be like clouds and with patience pass the gamut instead of being marooned in an island nice written sometimes I wonder too

If life not lived together? then what happens next all can imagine. Live life between us harmonious which is very much important and unique poem of awareness. Realized in better way and explained well. Nice job and beautiful poem.