Monday, July 29, 2013

Between Two Hearts Comments

Rating: 3.8

Tucked away in the
secret chambers of
of two hearts
...
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Ellen Ni Bheachain 02 May 2020

I think we all have had that love that goes unspoken of for some reason or another. Your poem put it so simply and true.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2019

This sounds familiar to me. Thank you for this loveliest poem, Heather.

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 July 2016

A lovely poem..love this one :)

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Bernard Snyder 18 June 2015

Short, yet so very sweet! Great one Heather!

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Sallam Yassin 05 August 2013

true love is a secret of two hearts -true lasting a lifetime

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Savita Tyagi 03 August 2013

this poem resonates with a desire at the core of our innermost being. Share our love yet keep a little corner just for our self. Loved it even if I am wrong in my comment.

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Dave Walker 03 August 2013

True love can never be broken. A great poem.

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Lyn Paul 31 July 2013

The love never revealed yet it is the dreams that keep them going. Lovely words. JUst LOVE all the LOVE. Thank You

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R.j. Wynn 31 July 2013

The memories last night longer than the last meal shared.

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Valerie Dohren 31 July 2013

A secret love? Perhaps it should be revealed. A lovely poem Heather.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 31 July 2013

Love... lasting a lifetime. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Lorraine Colon 30 July 2013

Very nice poem, Heather. What a great idea! Love cannot be emphasized enough.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 July 2013

The glowing flame of love between two hearts is expressed in simple but profound manner! Lovely!

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Valsa George 30 July 2013

The sweet pangs of forbidden love, beautifully expressed! !

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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013

OMG.just like to write the name of god.should i count it.thnx for sharing

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Wahab Abdul 29 July 2013

the hidden sadness expressed in the lines...to speak about is forbidden the pain too great..........................lovely poetry..

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 July 2013

well penned poem about forbidden love. let me end here.... Siya_! !

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Lucifera Santez 29 July 2013

you are maestro of words. this is a deep longing, tucked away in darkest recess of ones soul. as usual you have produced a piece of perfection. :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2013

Beautiful poem on unspoken love....

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Sekharan Pookkat 29 July 2013

Speak about love And love to speak Till the flames of love Glow every where.

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