Wednesday, April 20, 2022

Between Two Breath Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I reside between your breaths
like the moon between stars
like the waves in the ocean
like the wind passing leaves
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M. Asim Nehal
Mountains
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Nabakishore Dash 21 April 2022

Single soul in two bodies means love infinity dear poet. This poem teaches me many good metaphors.Brilliant.

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Poetic Sky 21 April 2022

A dream life: Our life is one like a single soul in two bodies....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 April 2022

well Done Doc Well Done

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 20 April 2022

Just you and me …. Beautiful poem..5 *s

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Suzon Albert 20 April 2022

5,4,3,2,1....Brilliant format. Superb poem.

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