Between Truth And Reality Comments

Wonderful poem dear poet. I remember this poem and poet for great imagery and beautiful diction. I loved reading it.

As if you are exploding, and collapsing; back in a tiny snow flake. giving a fine expression to the idea of depresion, .. one should never fall into the idea that i am a failure.. never.. we are never a failure.. there are thousand ways to achieve success.. pray to God. God will show you ways.. believe.. thank you my friend poet.. dev

inside on the verge of madness. As if you are exploding, and collapsing; back in a tiny snow flake. Words becoming like puzzles, very expressive of a point in life when everything seems to be meaningless to the point of becoming mad in a depressive way. meaninglessness can rule our thoughts sometimes. but we have to get rid of it. very fine poem. dear poet.

Something getting out of control; out of nothing, like a horse running through meadows. Want to control the flow but can't: Words becoming like puzzles Thoughts and visions oozing, from every corner of conscience: trying to describe the indescribable in our own selves. very expressive thinking, thank you dear poet