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This is wonderful. You balanced tragedy and humor very effectively.

I hope the men didnt return for Xmas and happy new year. the piece makes me wish to see the other men who wanted/prayed for your bliss and who stayed by you in june... thanx Liz for the suspence, i hope i will hang to death softly.

at last a love poem not filled with despair unhappiness gloom just a lovely trip with bouncing eyes