Between The Shores Of My Heart❤️ Comments

Excellent: The cerise shyness on her cheek Will melt by the firewood of my passion Making the sheet underneath sweaty with pearls

Wonderful words, free flow of thoughts and great imagery.

Superb Poem, Just can't stop reading the flow and the words.

A bridge of love! ! ! ! With the ridge of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

What a poetic delight! What a masterpiece!

My favourite lines are........I make a bridge of love to drink From the intoxicated lips of fate Which will fill drop by drop, my cup's thirst Where the virgin red roses From the exotic garden of bosom Waits to get crushed under passionate action. What a marvelous poem! Five stars.

Great poetic expression. Words flow straight to the heart.

Uncut diamonds are eyes and the body as a metaphor for life is amusing

Sublime love poetry. Superb flow... The cerise shyness on her cheek Will melt by the firewood of my passion Making the sheet underneath sweaty with pearls And two uncut diamonds in dark night

Great imagery in your poem. Where the virgin red roses From the exotic garden of bosom Waits to get crushed under passionate action

Another fantastic love poem. Nicely composed MAN.

Between the shores of heart a bridge is made and dreams are carried on with due love to materialize in this Earth. Love's wonderful perception is beautifully narrated with interesting note. This poem is brilliantly penned....5 full stars!