Sunday, December 5, 2021

Between The Shores Of My Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Between the shores of my dream
Under the flowing lustrous holy river
Where the white dove of wishes
Floats on the chariot of stars
...
Read full text

M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 December 2021

This is, indeed, a classic poem of absolute happiness......100 stars

0 0 Reply
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 December 2021

Wow! On the bed of pure pearls.....millions of joy float around.

0 0 Reply
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 December 2021

Such a beautiful poem, dear Asim ji. So much of joy and peace.

0 0 Reply
Mamta S 06 December 2021

Class poem. Gem of words.

1 0 Reply
David Wood 05 December 2021

A very profound write and very emotive. A 5* gem.

1 0 Reply
Tihama Hykam 05 December 2021

Holy dip in the words of your poem made my day bright.

1 0 Reply
Michael Jack 05 December 2021

To make life joyful such poems are required. I loved the way you wrote it.

1 0 Reply
Poetic Sky 05 December 2021

SO soothing poem, Millions of joy float around.

1 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
Close
Error Success