Between The Lines Comments

How gripping and moving this tale is. Needless to say, our lives mirror that tale within. Loved it

A very nice poem. Love it. 10+

a good form you filled here...in a most impressive way 10

However its structure..........this is a magnificent composition!

The content and message of this piece leave nothing to be desired, and the language is very natural. But using 'the' as a rhyme word and the line break ('although I shouldn't say / so') rather let it down. I haven't read all your PH works yet, but do you do anything else but sonnets? Perhaps there is a case here for writing this poem in a different form.

So true. Loved your poem.

Realistically ture, most can relate to. Thanks, A 10.

'Between the lines' is a poem, you could create a series from....it is a very matured poem with a compelling message of the many faces of people! !

This is a very heartfelt piece Mary. You breath life into the mundane so well.

I love the wise end to this friendly sonnet!