Between The Lines Is Night Comments

very moving for the heart, mind and soul. loved every repetion, and metaphoric description no matter how painful things were there's always a way to express that like you did in this piece of poetry great work! !

heart felt poem, nicly written: 0)

Between the lines is -night- is between you and me, Between your dream and your pain is night. No way out, It`s rainy. The same old rain between you and me, Tears of the rain, its sadness. Forgive and goodbye. Too many 'if' and too many 'but', But soules as before are inprisoned by high notes, Too much you had left between the lines, very nicely drawn to our mind

A little tale, well told. This has a distinct flavor. Effort. Well done Emma.10++

If it`s happened and we can never be together, If everything could be forgotten forevermore, Overcoming those sad days About you I shall remember. painful love...........touchy! 10++ to this heartful translation.

Truth is often painful...But goodbye is always better than A Dios, remember...