Monday, December 12, 2011

Between The Lines Comments

Rating: 4.5

so this is where we are,
where we will always be.
stuck between our words
misread,
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Jonny Brackney
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Dave Walker 08 May 2012

Sometimes my poems can be misread, it's the ones that are true that get misread, but not in a bad way. Really like this.

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Sara Fielder 13 February 2012

This poem is killer.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 February 2012

uah! fine poem. thanks.

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Adeline Foster 10 February 2012

Aspiration unrealized and well said! Your style is fascinating. Read mine – When Love Dies – Adeline

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Scotty Dogg 23 January 2012

I haven't read this one in awhile. Really like it. I like how you reference we but never really come out and say who the other one is. My guess was that you are talking about poets in general, maybe.

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Malini Kadir 26 December 2011

yes.... oh! your thoughts so match my own......love your work!

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Jonny Brackney

Jonny Brackney

Louisville, Kentucky
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