Thursday, August 25, 2016

Between The Lines Comments

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The lines are visible
The lines are legible
The lines are well organized
They are like a road map
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Rose Kanana
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Karen Kerubo 03 November 2016

True, the deeper meaning of a poem is in the interpretation. I shall read between the lines :) :) :)

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Ruth Nyokabi 10 September 2016

I love this poem most, it tells us to unravel literal and metaphorical meaning. At times is hard to decode the poets meaning especially where symbolism is rich.At times the message can get twisted and someone else may specifically know thus i echo your words Between the lines you see the horizon Between the lines you appreciate the power of words Between the lines the truth lay beautifully naked Between the lines emotions are not masked Between the lines lay the character of the persona Don't just read the lines darling

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Charity Karimi 29 August 2016

There you go sure the way out is to dig inside for there lies potentiality love that way of searching.

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Jane Biashara 29 August 2016

This poem paints you. how you talk while serious hahahhaha

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Rose Kanana 29 August 2016

your word counts against mine sister

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Kelly Kurt 25 August 2016

Very good advice and very well written. Noticing the subtleties is an art form that gets better with practice

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Rose Kanana 29 August 2016

Thanks Kelly keeping to the faith

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James Mwenda 25 August 2016

Great work....the famous cliche 'read between the lines' now makes poetic sense.

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Collins Waswa 25 August 2016

Good advise Don't just read the lines Read between the lines For between the lines lay the beauty of the poem For between the lines you grasp the theme For between the lines lay poetic justice For between the lines you identify with the poets emotions

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 August 2016

The lines are legible! ! Nice piece of work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2016

The lines are visible The lines are well organized The lines are legible....now the information is perfect with road map imagery. Interesting poem is drafted amazingly.10

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