Between The Dusk and The Dawn. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Between The Dusk and The Dawn.

Rating: 5.0


You are my star, you are my night.
You are my sunbeam, you are my
light. I have your love locked within
my heart so tight. Your voice, your
kiss, echo's through me as the thunder
claps with all it's might. Heaven knows
lightening did strike. Your touch is like
a cool breeze that touches me just right.
Just one smile and my heart ignites, if
you look into my eyes you'll see the flame
burning bright. Oh, don't you know you are
my life.

Tuesday, March 1, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

I liked your you... beautiful expression. Top score.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

"You are my life.." nothing can surpass this expression.." Just one smile and my heart ignites""

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

Beautiful, Becca. Loved reading.5 *s and myfav

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 March 2022

you outdid yourself BraVo! Bravo! Encore!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 March 2022

You hit it right. This is a delight.

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Isadora Quagmire 28 July 2025

Magnificent piece! Absolutely beautiful, excellent expressions of love! ! ! Full stars! ! ! Thank you so much for sharing : )

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Timber Koleden 25 May 2025

This is great! Thank you for sharing!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 March 2022

Another poem woven with passion and strong emotions that can move a reader to feel the presence of the Almighty. Thank you, Becca, for this very inspiring write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 March 2022

Each and every line speaks of great faith in the Lord. Faith that keeps one alive.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

Becca, I had to file my note in two parts for fear of exceeding 300 ch restriction for comments. We need to ask the admin to remove this restriction.

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