Rising to the surface
of morning altitude
Often the awakening more
than just a little rude
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You certainly like your bed poetry, Esther...and why not :) Another titillating offering from you...keep em up...so to speak :) Jack.
Esther, I really enjoyed you cuddle up in lar lar land, my favorite place, but we do have to bounce in the mornings to get the job done, well I do anyway, I have the alarm screaming Radio One! A very sensuously clever piece indeed. Smiling at you, Tai
Sensual, funny, expertly composed. A grand write! t x
Esther, This is delicious, and sensuous and timeless in its description. Beautiful morning, warmly remembered. love, Allie XXXX
I'm never very good at waking up, but you are very good at explaining it. Loved the part humour here, made it a light fluffy poem to read. Love Ernestine XXX
'Slip away into that nether region of freefall slowed and vision skewed' I particularly loved these lines Esther, wonderful description. Justine
Est, I too know this feeling. Unfortunately, I seem to spend the whole day in this limbo! (My alarm also has a snooze function which I have set to 48 hours) Danny (p.s. I'm only making plans for Nigel.)
Sleeping-in is always a bed choice.. but such a delight. As is this write. -chuck
ESTHER...LIKE THIS PIECE A LOT...DRIPPING WITH IMAGE AND INEUENDO LAST STANZA DEFINES THE ESSENCE OF THE POEMS STATEMENT...VERY NICE JOB, MS E.! '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Just five more minutes! Please! How well I know, you are a grand thinker Esther!
An awaking to the joys of sleep, well written and styled Love duncan X
I love this time of the morning! ! Nothing bothers me and I feel so yummy! ! I liked this poem very much Esther. From a fellow prayer warrior Karen x