Sunday, January 10, 2016

Between Our Hearts. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Between the fringes of our
heart beats exist a sky wearing
reading glasses.
A lamp burning our heredity
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Lihle Shezi
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Ernest Makuakua 21 January 2016

All those morning stars never thought of a black child who will shine as gold. Thank you soo much. I am a carbon copy of your former self. nice piece a good write thanks for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2016

I am a carbon copy of your former self. A slave for love and warm hugs, that you share outside very touching experience described so emotionally dear poet. thank you. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2016

Life is only a preface of a harlot. I am her son, with many fathers. I even father my own. I am a carbon copy of your former self. A slave for love and warm hugs, that you share outside. ohh very very touching poem my dear poet. thank you for publishing your intimate thoughts. tony

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Lihle Shezi 10 January 2016

Thank you Roseann for reading and sharing your thoughts.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Very good imagery, a mystical quality to this poem, I like it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Lihle Shezi 10 January 2016

Thank you Manonton Dalan. I hope life keeps me going through these poems.

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Manonton Dalan 10 January 2016

you're very welcome keep going and good luck

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