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" everybody comes as a friend, only to quickly show up as the worst Foe! " " showers of toxins don't stop, rains of Pains never end, you drench in your own! tied in years' long Chains of pain! " So much emotion and pain shown here, I wish you much happiness and peace.

Great poem. Yesturday, I met this Great Man. He is living on the streets of Hyderabad. He is jobless and homeless. Hoping he finds peace in his life.

Sad in a way, but the emotions are portrayed in a forceful manner. May you find the peace you so much desire.

every single line speaks for itself, i don't really think i'll assume i know what you where feeling when u wrote this. But honestly i can really relate. Those are just the dark times of onces life. Nice one...

A poem that speaks of the dark anguish of the soul, extremely well written. Hoping you find peace in life beyond poetry.

Right now he has no home he is staying in Hyderabad street's I spoke with that author today

Exceptional poem! Dear Poet, it touched my heart. Do not worry about length or stanzas, good poetry doesn't need any boundaries. Please keep on writing.

impressive, full of greatness

I felt it. Very well written.

Such a well penned poem, Siddartha......................

THIS IS GOOD A GOOD POEM

greatly written ///...........] Oh! pain, agony pain, agony main enemy main enemy porous thinking chorus living - impossible meaning impossible meaning .........

Amazing words you penned here

please comment on my lastest poem Beautiful Monster

Hmm! lovely, you are a grate poet

No doubt an excellent poem Going through enjoyed.10 +........

the agony depicted in the poem is powerful.

wow, it's a really great poem...thanks Montik

Well articulated, it's a true reflection of what the persona went through

Very emotional and so reminiscent of the pain and anguish we can all feel from time to time. Poetry is all about emotions and moreover invoking emotions. Your poem fits nicely into that niche especially where there is the inclination to wander off at a tangent or seem confused; it all adds to the melodrama.. Nice piece. Thanks for sharing.