Between Me And You Comments

I would have been one among the top If you had patted me I would have been yours If you had been mine a very good love poem showing the contrasts..... you know in eng. literature using the contrasts to express theme works powerfully and you are powerful in expressing the theme in your mind.. tony

Beautiful write. Thought provoking interrogation everywhere gives logical insight. Language, dition and rhyming scheme is appealing. I surely give my 10 to this.