Between Lines Comments
I failed to read between lines
Time was running out and not fine
I was to loose whatever was in possession
It was soon to do away with wrong obsession
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Who is to be blamed for our down fall? Did we respond to signal and timely call? Wow.....You write through experiences....So your poems carry a unique flavor of life.
The poem seems to be saying that notwithstanding the rise and fall of fortune, we must do our best and act as the situation demands. Thoughtful.
Great poem. Shown full of wisdom. Amazing write Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
This has so much potential within it. it is the kind of poem that brightens me with emotion in fact. I admire this.
‘Wealth’ and ‘wine’ search company of ‘women’ //Think of deadliest combination and bad omen… ‘3 Ws Wealth, Women, Wine Learn right use in rime Lest your dine Will be stale and malign’ ~ niv Thanks Sir…flying ten Ms. Nivedita UK
I haven't read a rhyming poem in ages. Enjoyed this. Thanks for posting.
Acumen containing… to read in between the line is such a wisdoms game. But to be in between the line is another thing… the message of this poem is quite amazing.
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The profundity of your poem makes me like to read it again. Thanks for sharing.