Friday, May 19, 2017

Between Life And After - Birth Comments

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There's no place or space to fit into, bereft and
lost, head hung low, nowhere to go, sandwiched be-
tween life and it's after- birth.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 20 May 2017

Life is the daylit side of Reality but it's pretty complicated even if everything is clear; Death is the dark side of Reality but as far as we can tell, it's not complicated. It's so pure. Well, that's where your poems originate. But my summary is just an overview there's no feeling in it. YOUR POEMS HAVE FEELINGS. The key goal is to live a fuller life before the darkness descends.

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