Tuesday, November 27, 2007

Between Hot And Cold* Comments

Rating: 4.2

Lying on the ground
Hair: orange, yellow and brown,
The stage coming now
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L.P. Alexanders
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Karan Pratap Singh 11 January 2015

A great poem indeed..

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i checked about 4 poems and found that all i did read before..is any one i didnot do read before..regards//10++++

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Janell Cressman 18 June 2009

wow, sounds nice, we have interseting weather here, it's just starting to get warm. after a long cold winter i can really understand this poem! ! nice job! !

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Don Pearson 18 June 2009

I must admit that I don't understand this. I think part of the problem for us with Haiku is that, as we are a worldwide community, it can be tricky to understand seasonal references that relate to a part of the world with whose climate, flora and fauna we are unfamiliar.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 June 2009

A short three liners, open to mass interpretation, but it lacks the intensity, unlike the longer version writes.Anyway thats poetry, some were written in such a way.Good job L.P.Alex!

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Eyan Desir 16 June 2009

interesting write simple but spells a messaGE

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short sweet and filled by colored images..well done 10++++

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Sara Tehrani 10 June 2009

I like that this poem could mean so many different things with your metaphors and beautiful imageryi think everyone will understand it differently. for me i see someone who is facing death and the stage is heaven, and the colour of their hair is changing and flashing different colours, as different aspects of his/her life is flashing in front of him/her. id love to know if im right or what its actually about?

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Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

The metaphoric interplay is so vivid that the poem is so short but the essence has proven its compactness and meaningfulness...10

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