Between Heaven And Hell Poem by Shaun Cronick

Between Heaven And Hell

Rating: 5.0


We stand between,
Heaven and Hell.
As if trapped in a dream,
And it's moral sleeping spell.

A decision to be made,
Which way to simply go.
Which one to simply choose,
Eternal bliss or endless woe.

In every human heart,
Dwells both bad and good.
A simple choice in life,
That should be understood.

Saturday, October 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,dream,good,heart,heaven,lifestyle,woe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bryony Sheldon 13 October 2019

A touching and truthful poem. Brilliant work!

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Shaun Cronick 28 March 2020

Thanks Bryony for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed it and take care. And apologies for this late reply. Hang in there and keep writing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 October 2019

A perceptive and insightful poem. Liked the wonderful lines in the ultimate stanza. Yes, in every human heart dwells both bad and good. It is a matter of choice. Very well written.

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Shaun Cronick 28 March 2020

Thanks for your kind comment Rose Mare. And apologies for this late reply. I'm having a spring clean going through my poems and replying any missed comments. Thanks again and take care.

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