Thursday, January 4, 2007

Between Heart And Mind Comments

Rating: 4.8

one day when i was sitting on my chair
gazing around the nature & breathing some air
i heard someone uttering, whispering & shouting
to my suprise it was my heart & my mind who were fighting.
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kavita bhat
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Manoj Gohel 09 January 2007

Dear Kavita, More I read more I understand your poems. This is very smart way of acceptance with caution for someone you love. Manoj

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Manoj Gohel 09 January 2007

Dear Kavita, The fear of losing is stronger than the happiness of having for some people. It could be an experience for someone also. Good work to put in the poem. Manoj

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Kee Thampi 05 January 2007

i know all wounds are healed as time moves on i wipe memories off so that they are never found i always rebel.....i m always rude to you but its simply because i really care for you! a good fable in gentle poem

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