Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Between Gertrude And Nicholson Street Comments

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Your eyes were glittering and profound
With love and grandeur in your every heartbeat
As we watched autumn spreads it’s placate breeze
Dancing between Gertrude and Nicholson Street
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R. Ariffin
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Emily Casbourn 28 October 2009

I really liked this poem. You did really well.

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Patti Masterman 20 October 2009

Such a drama unfolding in here. So colorful and mournful. We humans keep trying lovers on like a suit of clothes, expecting the first one to fit perfectly; and when they don't, we keep on looking, and looking..

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R. Ariffin

R. Ariffin

Johor, Peninsular Malaysia
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