Friday, March 24, 2017

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Such radiance gleams in the beam of your smile
I cannot stand to stop before one more mile.
What am I to do when the waves of your hair
dare me to compare them to the sun so fair
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Samuel Richard Leonard
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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

Love the ryhthm of writing, for me it speeds up the sentiment like you really need to say what you need to say, very well done, a wonderfull poem.

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