Dominic, now there's a well written poem with an eternity folding in on itself. It is not deep, it is fathomless. A great and most meaningful write and the message relayed. Five worthy stars and thank you for sharing your poem. Take care and enjoy life.
What I believe is called a social consious poem and well penned, Dominic.
Thanks guys...much appreciated! Eternity awaits us all one day.