Thursday, August 31, 2006

Between Comments

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Yesterday, I sat in bed, watching
flames lick the television screen and voices cry out
their horrorstricken moans-
Godforbid, they
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Ballerina With Fins
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William Jackson 01 September 2006

Well crafted poem! Your words engaged me from the beginning to the end, and it reminded me of innocence spoiled, how some evils sully us, even as shadow, despite the ever watchful eyes of Mother.

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Melvina Germain 31 August 2006

Wew, thank goodness it was just a dream, it kept me interested right through to the end.---very good poem---Melvina

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