Thursday, May 5, 2016

Betty On The Jetty Comments

Rating: 3.1

Betty on the jetty
Waiting for her sailor man.
White sails in the distance
Betty with her pram.
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Tom Billsborough
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 May 2016

Words of love she is singing! ! Nice piece of work.

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Tom Billsborough 10 May 2016

Thanks, Edward. Try singing it to Clementine. It's not quite there Tom

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Wes Vogler 05 May 2016

A poem is a poem when you can sing along with it. Very nice. Entertainment is the game. ta

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Tom Billsborough 05 May 2016

I'd a lot more verses planned but I thought it might give Billy a bad reputation! Tom

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Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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