Saturday, December 17, 2016

Better World Comments

Rating: 4.3

I want to live in a world
where everyone has the right
to await Freedom,
like all the beautiful mornings
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Walter W. Safar
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Benjamin Uy 02 January 2019

I want to live in a better world, I undestand these sentiments, ***** thanks

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Benjamin Uy 02 January 2019

I want to live in a better world, I undestand these sentiments, A world free of chains **** great poetry

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Benjamin Uy 02 January 2019

I want to live in a better world, I undestand these sentiments, Great great poem thanks poet

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 11 August 2018

A world with individual freedom for thought and opinion is really amazing and worth to human justice. good poem.

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Ramesh T A 23 December 2017

Wonderful dream, desire and wish to live in the world you have expressed in this poem! Nice one, my friend! Merry Christmas and New Year to You!

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Such a dream world is really beautiful and a good poem.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 10 January 2017

Living in freedom do one really enjoys freedom is a relevant question.Certainly not.One lives in the shadow of fear from fellow beings or one's freedom of choice curtailed by the society so on.The poet's eagerness for real freedom is nicely expressed in this poem.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 January 2017

lot of human aspirations that too live with dignity and freedom great ideas.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 December 2016

Living with the works of the truth. A world of peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 December 2016

Well done. A lot of good imagery. Happily, we have the freedom to openly express a desire for a better world. Tragically, many people don't have much freedom. And how about children that have been robbed of their freedom. You may appreciate Child Soldier.

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Diane Montemayor 20 December 2016

Dear Sir, i want to live in a world where true love and faith exist....I want a home, , a home with God.. Sincerely, diane

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 18 December 2016

To live in total freedom and at the same time useful to humanity is a real idea to be promoted and here I likes this poem in that spirit.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 17 December 2016

Great human aspirations expressed in the poem likes.

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