Thursday, April 12, 2012

Better This Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm sorry it ended like this
Maybe it was better this way
Don't look at it as a loss
For you, this should be a plus
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Sara Panicali
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Louis Rams 26 April 2012

you may find it better this way, but what he is thinking and feeling - who is to say!

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Makayla Straight 13 April 2012

I love how this flows. Im sorry you think this person is better without you. Sara I do not know you but from what you have emailed me you are a survivor. Maybe this person is not better without you but your better without them Thanks for sharing your work :) Best Wishes Kay Kay

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Dave Walker 12 April 2012

A really sad poem with a great flow to it.

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Blossom Mist 12 April 2012

simply beautiful..................... found it quiet realistic

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reminds me of innocence by AL. poem flows swiftly.

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