Monday, April 10, 2006

Better Than You Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you don’t want me
I will find better than you
Better than black and blued words that rotted with me once,
Soft dripping daggers that pierced fleshened heart.
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Lyndsey Grant
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Goldy Locks 28 June 2006

powerful, redemptive piece, Lyndsey. lots of vivid imagery. i felt the pouring of your emotion as i moved thru it. Sus

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