Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Wednesday, May 29, 2019

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An attractive young lady asked me
to get naked this morning, so I got down
off the cot and disrobed after she left.
Then my wife helped me into the hospital gown.
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Kim Barney
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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 February 2022

Great poem. Glad you survived to write a poem. Sometimes a biopsy can become a bioscope straight out of op theatre

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Belle Wassermeister 22 February 2022

The piano part was hilarious, and the last line is brilliant!

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 June 2019

A lovely sense of humour expressed well in a poem form.

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Kim Barney 08 September 2019

Thanks, Aniruddha.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2019

It is to agree that you are a master poet of humor. This is really a brilliant poem on surgery with humor and fun. TFS.

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Kim Barney 08 September 2019

Thanks, Kumarmani, old friend.

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Maryellen Smith 02 June 2019

I laughed out loud at the piano part, and again on the last line. Your sense of humor is unmatched on this website! Fabulous poem!

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Kim Barney 08 June 2019

Many thanks, Maryellen. Your comment is appreciated greatly.

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Spock The Vegan 30 May 2019

Funny poem, especially the piano part. See my new nature poem: Danger in a National Forest.

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Kim Barney 30 May 2019

Thank you for the comment, Spock. I will take a look at your new poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2019

wo beautiful sense of humor

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Kim Barney 30 May 2019

Thanks, Mahtab. I appreciate your comment.

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Jane Campion 30 May 2019

A lovely sense of humor. So lacking these days.

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Kim Barney 30 May 2019

Thank you, Jane. Most of my poems are intended to be humorous.

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Jennifer Birchall 30 May 2019

A little humour in what must have been worrying time. I wish you well. A great poem.

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Kim Barney 30 May 2019

Thank you so much, Jennifer. Comments are my only payment. I wish you well also.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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