In mirrors reflection I see,
the many impurities imparted within,
and the many a times I have failed thee.
Forgive me my Lady true,
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Beautiful, so lovley, a devotion from the heart. More than a simple ten! ! ! !
This comes across with real depth of feeling, very honest and individual, both great characteristics, well done Geoff Love duncan X
Geoff.... you are certainly writing some platinum poetry right now.... of outstanding quality! I give this a 10 most definitely..... so humbling.... HG: -) x
Sir g.>>>yes, indeed, i am rarely at a loss for comment, but as diane alluded to...tara took the gold on this one....but she needed the ammo to do so....and you most certainly provided her with it by penning this amorous gemstone of Warmheart...Splendid job, Good Sir! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
Tara said it all Geoff..................................a 10.
.It is, . and so it should be, better than roses, that is, for the sins of omission and self-imposed distance just aren't compensated by the cliched bunch from the garage forecourt! This appeals hugely, Geoff; a well composed piece from the heart and of the heart, and a fitting apology, if such it be.... an insight into many a woman's mind, too. t x
Now THAT's what i call an apology. This should definately get you out of the doghouse... and if you are still in it then no roses or diamonds could help you. Another fine penning, my lord. Cheers, Masha