Tuesday, November 21, 2006

Better Than Roses! Comments

Rating: 5.0

In mirrors reflection I see,
the many impurities imparted within,
and the many a times I have failed thee.
Forgive me my Lady true,
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Geoff Warden
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M S 25 November 2006

Now THAT's what i call an apology. This should definately get you out of the doghouse... and if you are still in it then no roses or diamonds could help you. Another fine penning, my lord. Cheers, Masha

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Patricia Gale 23 November 2006

Beautiful, so lovley, a devotion from the heart. More than a simple ten! ! ! !

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Duncan Wyllie 22 November 2006

This comes across with real depth of feeling, very honest and individual, both great characteristics, well done Geoff Love duncan X

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Original Unknown Girl 22 November 2006

Geoff.... you are certainly writing some platinum poetry right now.... of outstanding quality! I give this a 10 most definitely..... so humbling.... HG: -) x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 November 2006

Sir g.>>>yes, indeed, i am rarely at a loss for comment, but as diane alluded to...tara took the gold on this one....but she needed the ammo to do so....and you most certainly provided her with it by penning this amorous gemstone of Warmheart...Splendid job, Good Sir! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Diane Violet 21 November 2006

Tara said it all Geoff..................................a 10.

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.It is, . and so it should be, better than roses, that is, for the sins of omission and self-imposed distance just aren't compensated by the cliched bunch from the garage forecourt! This appeals hugely, Geoff; a well composed piece from the heart and of the heart, and a fitting apology, if such it be.... an insight into many a woman's mind, too. t x

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Geoff Warden

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