Monday, February 9, 2009

Better Than Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wake up for reality is calling
Better than dream colors are blowing

Swords of the sun tearing the sky above
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allan macli borges
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

What offers the dreams that reality does not? Rachel Ann Butler

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 February 2009

I see a very positive attitude Allan. Very wwell structured sweet sounding poem

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009

Beautiful poem with wonderful imagery and good rhyme and rhythm. Life is better than dream anyway........10/10. Best Wishes naseer

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