Monday, December 22, 2008

Better Place Comments

Rating: 2.5

i'm lying on the ground
looking up at the sky
i feel the wind blow my hair
and my body starts to rise
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melissa dixon
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Mona Martinez 27 April 2009

wow. now that was the coolest poem i ever read.

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Mona Martinez 27 April 2009

wow. now that was the coolest poem i ever read.

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White Slash 28 December 2008

i feel the wind blow my hair and my body starts to rise good lines. this is really good. cool images... I liked it alot. everyone needs to be happy even down here. job well done. Andy

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Sabrina Jubahar 22 December 2008

'I dont have to scream to feel better' Great line. we do scream sometimes, just to feel 'something'. Thanks

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