Saturday, February 23, 2008

Better Off... Comments

Rating: 4.5

why must you glue me back together when everything was coming apart?
why did you leave me, from the start?
why would you have stayed by myside when you knew i wasnt the right guy?
why did you have to pretend, when everything went wrong?
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Dislocated Heart
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Coreena Dejesus 06 March 2008

Very good read and alot of emotion.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

emotional and vivid........

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Emancipation Planz 26 February 2008

Compel to read this to the end... I was better off for it... so just to say - keep writing... there will be many a babe that will want to keep glued to these pieces!

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 25 February 2008

oooh so something did happen to you wat happened? ?

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