Better Luck Next Time Comments

Love, which feels bitter that it didn't find in the other, sharing same deep feelings, and hopes (perhaps) ? to meet it again. I would not rate it as well developed, but think with some more thought it cud upgrade its line theme. More important is to keep going, read all the ancients, and study poetic tedhniques, at least in order to have something to disagree with. Keep it up, it's always a painful experience, but you'll find another, I'm sure. Panmelys

A nice poem written by a person who really knows what is the importance of a relationship..! ! ! ! !

Its a poem written by a person who really has a lot of fell for the one whom he misses

better luck is a word which seeks something and here i find the love and apart game on field

hopefully I'll see you on that day. Good work.

true thought, surely that day will come in your life

sweetly written sir. keep up

Interesting. Not good enough to be a classic, but a decent poem with honesty and nothing offensive about it. Is this written from experience, maybe?

Nice poem. I like how u are being realistic and how much emotion u put in this poem. Keep it up. I rate it 10 out of 10

the 2nd & 3rd stanzas strike me! ! I like the uncertainty of it bcoz it personifies the human mind when not sure about a fellow human being's choice esp. a girl which in my opinion is being realistic, not pessimistic.

Nice poem. What a waiting, better luck next time :) Like this poem

Expresses the emotions well, but not well developed.